Live Poll: Favorite Paul Schrader Screenplay

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Paul Schrader is one of the best scriptwriters of the cinema, in his youth he wrote great films that today are great classics and has also served as a director with very good works. Which of these scripts written by Paul Schrader is your favorite?

List: https://www.imdb.com/list/ls048841825/

Poll: https://www.imdb.com/poll/9xwBmkzzvig/
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joe siegel

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Posted 7 months ago

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Dan Dassow, Champion

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Joe,

This is a run-on sentence:
Paul Schrader is one of the best scriptwriters of the cinema, in his youth he wrote great films that today are great classics and has also served as a director with very good works.

Please change the comma after cinema to period. Also, break up the sentence into three shorter sentence:
Paul Schrader is one of the best scriptwriters of the cinema. In his youth he wrote great films that today are great classics. Schrader has also served as a director with very good works.